The inattention being paid to production of The Star’s print edition is really starting to piss me off.
You might remember a few years ago when speculation was rife that the Kansas City Aviation Department was intentionally cutting back on maintenance of KCI in order to convince people of the need for a new terminal.
I never did put any stock in that — the city’s maintenance of everything under its 300-plus-square-mile purview is always in flux — but now I’m beginning to wonder if The Star is letting the print edition slide as part of its and parent company McClatchy’s big push to switch readers from print to digital.
More and more, the print edition — for which The Star’s asking price is $60 to $70 a month — consists of column after column of black type, with relatively few photos, graphics, quote boxes and other visual elements that would make it much more appealing.
But that’s not the worst part. More stories with big holes are popping up. I mean figurative holes that leave you scratching your head and wondering why the stories don’t make sense.
I’ll give you two examples.
Example No. 1: A few days ago — I believe it was Monday but I’ve recycled the paper — medical affairs reporter Andy Marso had a front-page story saying an auditing firm had discovered that nearly 70 percent of the patients whom Truman Medical Center officials had deemed eligible for help with their bills by the city were, in fact, not eligible.
The subsidies come from a city health levy that generates about $50 million a year. Marso did not estimate how much money the ineligible payments was costing taxpayers, but my guess is it could easily be several million dollars.
I wasn’t far into the story when it began alluding to someone named Walsh, who clearly was the primary source of information.
However, the story was missing a “first reference” to Walsh, that is, Walsh’s full name and title.
Paragraph after paragraph cited information provided by “Walsh,” but the reader never learned the full name or title.
Naturally, the story left me frustrated, so I went to kansascity.com and looked up the story to see how the online version compared.
As I expected, the online version contained the first reference very high in the story. The mystery source turned out to be Elizabeth Walsh, a Kansas City Health Department statistician.
Walsh was so important to the story that the online version also had a photo of her.
Now that photo would have really helped the print-edition story, but I would have settled for a simple line saying, “Elizabeth Walsh, a statistician for the Kansas City Health Department.”
…What probably happened, I can tell you from experience, was an editor inadvertently cut the first reference in an attempt to make the story fit into the designated news hole. It was the worst possible cut and had the effect of making a muddle of the story.
Example No. 2: A story on Page 4A of yesterday’s paper ran under the headline, “Man stole KCPD car, drove wrong way.”
Well, you don’t have people stealing police cars every day, so that piqued my interest.
The writer was longtime police reporter Glenn E. Rice, who, like Marso, is a very able reporter. Rice recounted how 30-year-old Keith A. Conner of Kansas city stole a cop car and took police on a 15-minute chase on the west side of downtown and then into Kansas City, KS. At one point, he was driving the wrong way on Interstate 35.
Naturally, I was very curious as to how the chase ended and where.
Alas, I and other readers of the print edition were not to find out.
Here are the last two paragraphs of that story on Page 4A:
Conner eventually drove west toward Avenida Cesar E. Chavez, where he allegedly ignored a stop sign and continued into Kansas City, Kan. Other law enforcement, including the Kansas Highway Patrol and Kansas City, Kan. Police Department, joined the chase.
Authorities estimated that the chase caused nearly $6,000 in damages to the patrol car.
Now, the story started out naming the driver (Keith Conner) and saying he was facing criminal charges. So, how was he apprehended? And where?
Again, I had to go to the online version. What I found was that two paragraphs near the end of the story had been cut.
Here are the two pivotal paragraphs print-edition readers didn’t see:
Police said Conner drove through a barricade at S. 18th Street Expressway and Kansas Avenue and continued for about half of a mile before crashing into a guard rail.
He jumped out of the car and ran. Police arrested him after a short chase.
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The foot chase might have been short, but for readers of The Star’s print edition, the chase never ended.